Monday, March 3, 2008

*you know those days...

you know those days when all that you can see
is the sidewalk lines, and the shadow of the trees?
and every thought you  think somehow makes it hard to breathe,
and every sight you see somehow makes the world blurry...

you know those days when all that you can feel
even when it's warm, is a freezing, goose-bump chill?
and every step you take never fully feels real,
and every soft embrace seems to almost turn to steel...

and then you know those days when you start to see the sun,
when you start to feel warm, and you want to tell someone?
that you can breathe again, that your world is not a blur,
and that getting through each day becomes a little easier?

i think we all know those days, though we often do forget...
so when a friend is down, we calmly do not seem to fret.
but we should realize that their days feel just as blue
as when we had those days, and so now it's up to you
to chase away the clouds for this chilly, shady friend
and help them find the sun, so they feel happy, warm again. 



*dedicated to some people in my life whom i dearly, sweetly love.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

thank you for what you did yesterday... it means the world to me.

MJ said...

you're so sweet and you write sooooo beautifully. hey, how bout you write a book and dedicate it to me?? good plan.
btw i have a new post.
do you ever check melissa reviews??
it doesn't really matter. i hardly ever post, but its a thought to chase away the work day boredom.

Meg Duffy said...

did I tell you this made it in my journal... my kids will read about this, about you... and then they will KICK YOUR BUTT in our families TURKEY BOWL 2020, that gives me 12 years to have kids.... dang.... I want a child by the year 2010! That is my goal!!!!!!!

brooke said...

2010 meg? thats less than 2 years away...quite ambitious of you!
hana, this is a lovely poem, it took me two reads to figure out that it wasnt a song or something. i hope you get warm soooon...

brooke said...

ps- even your blog is turning pastel!